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A Mistake in Haste
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A Mistake in Haste |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
A Mistake In Haste I have nothing to write This terrible night I would much rather just take flight Sail through the sky so very high till all the tear drops dry. A mistake in haste we have made. Pressures put where they do not belong A friendship torn? If I only knew? You Looked so blue. Drunken laughter with the smell of Booze was it me or was it you? A mistake in haste What a waste Feeling that were so true. Feelings that are now colored blue. Me and You. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem here i love how you give the color blue such a meaning here keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
man oh man. i think i still kick myself to this very day for some of my mistakes in haste. excellent work here, blue!!!!!! i think i can see you flying. and doesn't it just throw you for a curve, when you feel you can't write the words, and you come up with poems like this great one here????? kynder A woman to a man is But a mere chapter, But a man to a woman Is an entire book.-- Kynder Howell |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Some say that they wouldn't chang a thing in there past, well I sure would, plenty. Drunk or not. Great poem kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wonderful work! I have wondered if, given the chance, should I change my past mistakes, if I did would I have learned the same lessons? God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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