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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-31 06:52 AM


Closing Off


I don't think I can do this
I am not sure
how to handle myself
or the whole situation
and am beginning
to not "feel" anymore.
I wish to just lay here and
become invisible...
no one can see, hear
or know of my thoughts.
I don't want any thoughts
I want only peace and quiet
to join in my emptiness.


© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-31 07:17 AM


this hurts Maureen...
please dont let yourself stop "feeling"..its hard to come back from that place once youve fallen.
be well, child of the moon, I care.
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-08-31 08:42 AM


Maureen, remember the moonlight it has the power to heal. Just a glimmer at a time.
This is such a desolate poem. Walk with me through the desert. email me if you want to.
Smiling softly and holding gently.~
Be well
Kethry.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-08-31 01:00 PM


~Dawn...my emotions are bouncing and I can't seem to control them  just yet...thank you for your caring
M

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-08-31 01:02 PM


Kethry

thank you, but I just don't want to place my weight on anyone else...
~~soft hugs
Maureen

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-08-31 06:32 PM


Sorry you are having these sad and lonely times.
Hope each new day will get a little brighter for you...James

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-09-01 05:01 AM


James
I am hoping so too..right now it's a battle of the wills I believe
~~soft smile
Maureen

Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
7 posted 2000-09-01 10:31 AM


Even when you are writing of sadness your poems are beautiful, M...always expressive.

...chanson~

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"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..."
P.B. Shelley


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-09-01 09:10 PM


*hugs from Isis too*  Don't cut off or kill your feelings, for they are the essence of you, and anyone can see they are sweet!!  Those that don't - aren't worth your time.
Sorry you feel so down hon, know they are friends here who DO understand..
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



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