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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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This isn't exactly Dark but what they hey, it's regretful instead... Our Duet I heard your heart beat, I could feel it, Now there's only quietness, How I long to feel it again. Wrapped safe within your arms, My head resting on your chest, Our hearts beat in time, together or apart, But we failed the final test. I imagine listening again, I imagine that and so much more, But fate tore us apart, Bad judgements closed the door. One day I might feel that Rumba again, It's a hope I carry with me, Regardless of fate, this heart beats on, But it longs for the duet that was you and me. *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh... it's so sad and beautiful and totally understood. Great idea to compare a relationship to Rumba, music of love and passion... Take care! |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Isis, I've always believed that if we lose faith and hope, then we have nothing left. Your poem has me thinking about these two little words that are such a cornerstone in people's lives. Thoughtful read with my morning coffee, thank-you.  Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
my sweet sweet sis *hugs and kisses* there have been many nights that i have said this to myself. wanting to feel what i once had with a very special person. you know who that is. a truly great peice that is most defenitly going iin my library. i love it sis. once again you have tugged on the strings of this old rebels heart. *hugs*love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Eh dark, regretful? What’s the difference anyway? Title drew me in, and the content didn’t disappoint. I’m sorry that your duet is out of commission, uh… It’s not fair that such a wonderful person like you, Is sad (Regretful), so hope you feel better…Lalala. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks guys!~ Sonjes - if there is one thing this lady has and will never lose is faith and hope, they are indeed the cornerstone of one's life and humanity in general!! *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Cool poem Isis...I want to feel that rumba also...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, may I have this dance my kindred friend? Just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sure Sven, but I lead this time!!  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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