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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
love me please save me from my self take me away from this existence of mine envelope me within yourself embrace me all my beauty and all my ugliness and never let go never |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"embrace me all my beauty and all my ugliness and never let go never" these feelings are shared...we all want to be fully embraced,saved,truly loved. this was much enjoyed. ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
simply beautiful... you know how to write of true love. -Jes |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oooooohhhhhh....silentsky!!!! that's awesome!! I absolutely loved! where are you from in Israel? |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Superb  But then I adore the word envelope... it can mean so much  I like using it in my poems too! "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
applause to you, Very beautiful |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I love this, so sweet, yet so desperate. I hope you find someone who does just that! (If you haven't already, that is) Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi Silentsky, This one definetly has feeling. I like the way you use quick snappy lines. They go real deep. Keep em coming! "Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
I agree with boardman. The small lines pierced my soul... I truly felt this one. It was really, really, REALLY good. Good luck in your search for true love... but it's like a ghost... many talk about it, but only few have truly seen. Great work!! I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break ~Lil OnE~ |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
this is an affecting arrangement of words. you take to love with a scalpel and expertly expose its fragile core. i read the last line and melt ilph. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Silentsky. Good things come in small packages this is no exception. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful thoughts and desires that we all need to see fulfilled...James |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
what a wonderful poem! Your thoughts were brilliant!! keep it up!! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~ :) If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. :) ~*~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
geez...great poem...like it a lot!!! love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
What are we without love? It is like food. We need it to survive on this earth, to be norished. --Little One |
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