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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Somebody else's Somebody else got lucky This time it wasn't me. Somebody else is happy That's how it's meant to be. Somebody else I envy My dream is her possess. One thing I truly needed Belongs to someone else. Nothing I can do now A thought I can not stand Oh, a mistake so brutal To fall for married men...  [This message has been edited by LM (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great poem. You pack so much power in it.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Funny...I always heard that married men were the best because you never had to take care of them... I AM KIDDING!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway...your poem is an enjoyable read, LM and very true...never fall for a married man unless you're out looking for trouble.  Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
WOW!!! BRAVO!!! I can totaly relate to this. For you see, I fell in love with a married woman. She was the one that I started writing for and she never even asked me to do it. It just came out of me when we were together. Yes, we had an affair. She was my cheif inspiration and the person whom I have written most of my pieces about, including the one I'm about to post. Thank you so much for this piece! I'm glad I'm not alone in feeling this way. Take care. I wish you all the best! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
OK, thats it, you have to email me, we have to talk. This is a most perfect description of the feeling. Sandra |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hey hun *hugs* i know how you feel. if you read my work as you have i know you can see. as for i am in love with a soon to be married woman. and i know how it feels. if you ever need to talk just let me know ok?? e-mail me sometime. *hugs* great work hun. love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Heh..talk about syncronicity. There are a few threads in Open which cover this subject as well, in addition to a thread by Christopher in the Alley. Pop on by and give a quick read, and perhaps, a reply. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Xeonox: thanks for the reply Sonjes: It's really easy for you to talk, but sometimes life throws us into such unbelievable tales, no movie could describe... If you think I fell for the man because of my love for "troubles"... well, what can I say except that I'm happy for you, you weren't that "lucky"... thanks for your reply G. A. Webb: Thanks so much! You definetely seem like you know what I'm talking about... Like in that poem of yours "looks like YOU", I believe it was called. Thanks a lot for your comment! Catalinamoon: Thanks for the reply and the offer to chat, I'll definetely write you soon Jesse... thanks a lot dear I feel your pain as well, thank your for offering your help I'll write!Alicat: Thank you as well, I'll drop in and read Thanks again guys, I wasn't expecting such an understanding and care! Love you all, LM. [This message has been edited by LM (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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