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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
sometimes i dont really exist as i sit before you your words pouring into my mind i hear nothing i'm in some nonexistent world reaching a conclusion about what i am not then suddenly as if echoing my thoughts about my own self you ask me if you are boring me and i hear myself saying you are not my hand seems to be brushing a strand of hair from my face and i am wondering about the connection between me and my self feeling that i only half ever exist |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
"Feeling that I only half ever exist". Powerful thoughts, and I have had this feeling also. To me, it's like being removed from everything, seeing it happen, but not really able to fully be there. Painful. Take care. catalinamoon |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
A non-existent world? What a wonderful place, one could just go there and disappear forever, you must tell me how to reach it! It’s like watching your life on film, isn’t it? The helplessness is so…exquisite. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
You have encapsulated well a feeling not oft expressed silentsky. Enjoyed your poem  "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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