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Breathless Beauty
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
Breathless Beauty by J.Sage (3/1/1998) protected by copyright Breathless beauty, clear your head and bind your past I give you peace. I give you love. I offer my soul, In return for yours Breathless beauty, you need to see… a necessity, a way, a resolution. Here, with me. I see our pain's conclusion. Take my nails away and I will take the marks they left Breathless beauty, I will swallow your scars I can endure the suffering I can survive without breathing. I will hand you my athame My rusted dagger Damaged by air and time You may use it to carve a new path You may use it to carve a future, our future. Breathless beauty, can you hear the bells ring? Can you see the silver and gold? Can you taste the champagne? I can. All for me and my silent love Sweet voices sing to us You need to, want to, but cannot chime in I long to hear your voice Breathless beauty, do not be afraid of my fear And do not cry from my pain I am strong, but you are stronger Live. Do not leave Love. Do not lie Speak. Do not be silenced Oh my breathless beauty, I can set you free I can already smell the relief Do not fear my open lungs Breathless beauty, it's time to breathe. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
breathless indeed! very well spoken! "breathless beauty, I will swallow your scars I can endure the suffering I can survive without breathing" a very fine entrance...welcome to passions!  whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
That's really good. Welcome to passions. Dark Star |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Welcome to Passions...I hope that your stay is a long and prolific one as I am looking forward to reading more...much more...make me greedy for your words.  Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
OOOOOOHH! Now that I can breathe again, welcome to passions. Hope to be reading more of your work soon. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to passions!! How breathtaking, refreshing, old worldly *sigh* everything this poetess loves. Wonderful stuff, I'll be looking for another 'fix' soon  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Love, tragedy, things suffered by the sane. Those of us who have crossed the line no longer find the time, there are so many paths to explore, pains to enjoy, demons to converse with…oh, the things they can show you! But I’m losing sight, I read “Cut Me Down”, so I now understand what you meant. I think I remember what love feels like…I’m so sorry yours is dying… Breathless Beauty, what a shame, death by suffocation can be quite uncomfortable. Again, I applaud you for you vivid skill in capturing these things we have a love-hate relationship with, these emotions. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
I want to thank all of you that commented on my poems. I never expected much positive response from anything I've posted. It's very kind of you to share your feelings with me and to know that other people not only appreciate but can relate to what I've written is a really good feeling. -Jes |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
magical words here, very serene |
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Maya the Brokenhearted Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 66 |
*sigh* yes indeed. A reply eludes me, but I can say this, your words touched me and made me yearn. Nice...  ~Maya |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Very interesting poem. Good job writing it, and welcome to (Dark) Pasions! |
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