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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-22 09:21 AM


Dreamed
had I, in nightfall
of thy face
and of eyes that shine
as the very stars
that scattered their dust
upon this body
as it laid beneath the opened windows
in shadows of the night
seeking the one star to wish upon
to bring thee home to me
to hear thy voice, it's whispers
that touch this very soul
to dream of thee and thy words of love
to lift me when e'er the morn has come

Your Lady


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Dark Enchantress
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1 posted 2000-08-22 04:22 PM


MMoonchild,
    This is absolutely beautiful... everything about it is just great. I love it!

                                 Angel


I wish you could hear
the child that cries
in my flesh and makes
my bones ache
-Jewel

~*Angel of Darkness*~


MMoonchild
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2 posted 2000-08-22 06:40 PM


     Angel
thank you..I had done a running  theme with a friend as Lady Ollyne and he was Chulwood and I posted just two of them here today...I love the whole theme..but I would need his permission to post his love poems back to me..
~~soft smiles
M (Lady Ollyne

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3 posted 2000-08-27 03:09 PM


This is just simply awesome. I cannot believe that I missed reading this one. Thank your for sharing your talent my dear.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

LM
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4 posted 2000-08-27 04:52 PM


Beautiful... I Love this style!
sonjes
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5 posted 2000-08-27 06:11 PM


this whispers "beautiful" to the reader...captivating read!

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-08-27 09:36 PM


Xeonox

thank you...hmmm maybe I shall ask Chulwood to start posting to me once again..and I, Lady Ollyne shall respond...'tis fun you know
~~soft hugs
Maureen

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-08-27 09:42 PM


Tis a tale well told of a love in days gone by...
Sven and I are doing the same sort of thing here in dark and in adult!!  LOL
Really enjoyed this  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


LOTR
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since 2000-07-31
Posts 68
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8 posted 2000-08-27 11:11 PM


This was truly beautiful! Not much more I can think of to say, it's just beautiful.
        Thanks!
               Richi


Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-09-01 04:59 AM


LM...it's a fun style..makes you work at the language...

sonjes..I am glad you could enjoy my words


Isis..I think it's so nice to write in a different time and make a story out of it...someday I hope my friend and I can finish it


Richi...thank you for the beautiful's...

thank you all for taking the time to read and respond to me
~~soft hugs
Maureen


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