Dark Poetry #2 |
Dreamed, Had I...For You |
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Dreamed had I, in nightfall of thy face and of eyes that shine as the very stars that scattered their dust upon this body as it laid beneath the opened windows in shadows of the night seeking the one star to wish upon to bring thee home to me to hear thy voice, it's whispers that touch this very soul to dream of thee and thy words of love to lift me when e'er the morn has come Your Lady |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
MMoonchild, This is absolutely beautiful... everything about it is just great. I love it! Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Angel thank you..I had done a running theme with a friend as Lady Ollyne and he was Chulwood and I posted just two of them here today...I love the whole theme..but I would need his permission to post his love poems back to me.. ~~soft smiles M (Lady Ollyne |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This is just simply awesome. I cannot believe that I missed reading this one. Thank your for sharing your talent my dear. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Beautiful... I Love this style! |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
this whispers "beautiful" to the reader...captivating read! Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Xeonox thank you...hmmm maybe I shall ask Chulwood to start posting to me once again..and I, Lady Ollyne shall respond...'tis fun you know ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Tis a tale well told of a love in days gone by... Sven and I are doing the same sort of thing here in dark and in adult!! LOL Really enjoyed this *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
This was truly beautiful! Not much more I can think of to say, it's just beautiful. Thanks! Richi Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
LM...it's a fun style..makes you work at the language... sonjes..I am glad you could enjoy my words Isis..I think it's so nice to write in a different time and make a story out of it...someday I hope my friend and I can finish it Richi...thank you for the beautiful's... thank you all for taking the time to read and respond to me ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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