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Poetry Princess
Junior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 28
Des Moines, IA

0 posted 2000-08-20 11:10 AM

I will always Love YOU

I am scared and I just want
to break down and cry
You are hurting more and more
as each day goes by

I have never loved anyone
not the way that I love you
Yet I don't know how to deal with it
I don't know what to do

I need you in my life
I need you to hold me tight
But lately all we seem to do
is argue and fight

I am not saying it is all you fault
I've done my fair share
But lately when we fight
you don't seem to care

I don't think you understand
how much you mean to me
And lately I know I have been mean
and that's not the person I want to be

I just want to be happy and I want to be
with you and never let go
But you don't want to be with me
and if you do it doesn't seem to show

I wish you would tell me
how you really feel inside
You can be honest with me
you should have nothing to hide

I am an understanding person
and I will always love you
No matter what you say
no matter what you do

Please remember I will always love you

POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend?

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

1 posted 2000-08-20 11:21 AM

Wow...I really liked it. Hope whatever happens is for the best.

Dark Star

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-20 03:40 PM

I really enjoyed this coz it just hit home for me...
Thanks, take care!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-08-20 03:59 PM

This reminds me of disagreements with my old time girlfriend Sharon..we would actually have problems because she felt like my feelings were not exactly the same as hers..I tried to explain to her that desires can take different amounts of time to develop...she focused so much on my feelings or lack of feelings that she actually destroyed the relationship...because she was always putting pressure on me to think exactly like her...of course we know she can only control her feelings...and mine will only grown when I feel relaxed and accepted..the arguing destroyed the possibilities....really...James

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

4 posted 2000-08-20 04:10 PM

Ok, this was awesome!! I loved it, yet I hate the feeling. Wonderfully described, though!
"I hate hating you,
I hate loving you.
I can't stand being your friend,
and I can't live being your enemy"
Part of a poem that I wrote, thought I'd share it. Anyway... great work, Poetry Princess

Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken.
~Lil OnE~

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

5 posted 2000-08-21 09:54 PM

Yes great work kid, and as James said the arguments can destroy a relationship for sure. If you want to have someone love you, you must look at what they will love, and that's you some times that's hard to do, is look at yourself, to see just what they are getting.

Joel.< !signature-->

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

[This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 08-21-2000).]

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