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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Today my mind arrives with a thought laid, Establishment of devil places viciousness at bay, Shaking the foundation of the very life, Exemplifying the levels of my strife, Heaving the load on ancient thighs, To what ends do I bring such lies? Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
i like this poem a lot... it makes me think thanks, kat |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I know many of you might not reply to my poems in here because they are plain weird and I understand that. Thank you for readin them though. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~C'mon X,...they are not wierd....they are dang interesting to me! I always enjoy reading your work. Including this one. It's heavy. It's an expression I find well worth my time to read. Please keep 'em coming. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
well you already know what I think but I will say it here...this is awesome in its simplicity...amazing in its depth...great write my friend |
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