Dark Poetry #2 |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Questions Why do I live? Why do I want to die? Questions in my head All what ifs and whys All these things I can’t seem to comprehend Why do I do this? Do I have any real friends? I cannot seem to function I cannot seem to think Want to stop existing Deeper in this hole I sink What will it be like? If I really do it Will anyone be sad? How will they get through it? No one will blink an eye If I decide to leave What if I died tonight? Would anybody grieve? Can anyone help? What would it matter If I killed myself? They do not know How I think or feel Repeating thoughts run through my head Like an old news reel All these little questions Going through my head Am I better off alive? Am I better off dead? |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Darkstar... I feel that life is always best...it can be hard, but life is best. Why? Simply: It is a gift. Though at times it is really hard to see that... Perhaps if you are questioning this however, you could seek out some help? As I am sure you are aware posts that glorify suicide or encourage suicide are not permissable. Your poem is more a reflection on suicide that either of the above, however your forum moderator Isis has posted an announcement that includes a refresher on this topic. It might be a good idea to read it: /pip/Forum35/HTML/001769.html Honestly Darkstar, reach out for help if you need it. Severn |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwww darkstar (hugs) I use to ask myself these questions also. Here I am 29 and still trying to understand life and the meaning behind it. But hey..... reach for the sparkle in the sky. There's always more light that goes along with it. Peace DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
You can live a thousand lives, but you can die but once. Death is a most grievous commitment, there are some in this world that fight to insure their lives and the lives of their loved ones. But here you are, prepared to just surrender yours…Interesting, don’t you agree? Not only grievous, but quite permanent I’m afraid. Life sucks, on that you’ll get no argument, but it’s all we have, no second chance, no retry. Today cannot be changed, but tomorrow is another day. If you want to talk, my Email addy is in my profile… Take care, ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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