Dark Poetry #2 |
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If I had known... |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
If I had known Life wouldn't be the same once you are gone If I had known I'd long to hear your voice over the phone If I had known My loneliness would fill my every bone If I had known... If I had known I'd miss you I'd hold you tight so you won't fade and gently kiss you... I would make sure you know each moment spent with you is blissful Love you is what I'd do If I had known how much I'd miss you... If I had known how much I had to gain... I'd give myself to you without a shame, I'd tremble every time you call my name, And carefully I'd guard our passion's flame. If I had known, I'd make sweet love to you And pick the stars and moon To give to you at dawn. If I had known, Today I'd be with you and not alone... Anybody thinks I should show this to him? Will it work? ![]() |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes..take a chance..if you have nothing to lose and it won't hurt if he rejects you! Good poem. ![]() |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
deVine...Of course it will hurt! rejection is never taken painlessly... |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I wrote a poem very similar, but shorter. Same sentiment anyway. I say that showing it to him would be a good idea if you have any inclination that he still cares for you. I have done this actually, and though in the end it didn't work out ![]() In addition to the little bit of rambling, I want to say it was a very touching and well done poem. Catalinamoon |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks Cat... If he still cares I'm gonna find out today through my friend... If he doesn't, I'm not even gonna try, there are plenty more fish in the sea. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i hope to find out that everything works out well for you then! great, heartfelt poem! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks a lot Dawn ![]() I hope so too, I already see sparks of hope, therefore my last poem's called "You're back..." ![]() |
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