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Dark Poetry #2
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Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
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0 posted 2000-08-18 07:44 PM


Take me into your heart.
Let me see the ways of you.
My world is blown apart.


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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
1 posted 2000-08-18 08:21 PM

~A new dawn Click,...a new dawn. This poem and it's briefness (if ever there is such a word) does not lack feeling and strong message. It simply breathes it. Wonderful. Take care of you. *Peace.
fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958
2 posted 2000-08-18 11:38 PM

Although this poem is rather short, it delivers a rather powerful message.  It conveys a sort of loss of purpose, and the seeking of a renewed purpose.  Good job.
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-08-19 11:33 PM

Awesome!
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