Dark Poetry #2 |
Sky Catcher |
T.Rose Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 20 |
Sky Catcher I hear a sweet little red robin, And she sings a happy tune. I see a strong proud hoot owl, And she flies high by the glow of the moon. I see a nesting snow white dove, And she is priming her soft feathery breast. I see the old grey alley cat, And she has put them all to rest. Theresa Rose |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is sad, and beautiful. Though I do love cats! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank you for Sky Catcher, this poem made me laugh. Good job on the unexpected ending. Be well Kethry< !signature--> "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hi there T. Rose,...this sounds like it could be in a children's story book. Great work. Maybe a bit graphic for them (children) but still it's nature and it is what goes on. Nice verses. Love the title for this. Take care now. *Peace. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
That's a really cool poem...I liked it a lot. Dark Star |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hehehe Funny, and cool title too! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
So cute, love this one. |
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