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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-08-17 07:51 PM


I love you truely
I sure do
But I can not play
this game with you
I know you care
but thats all thats there
I dont know why I even tried
You brought out feelings I dont
regret Ill never forget
My love runs deep and is so true
But you are causing me to come
unglued.
I will always love you
and when your eyes shine
my heart will feel happiness
that spands beyond time
I will always share.
what I cherish most
as for you and me I have given up
hope.
I will not join that midnight
ride that makes us all feel so high
I will let you have your time
it pleases me to please you
my heart is true
But yours only cares
as a friend you do
you can not love me
as I love you
so this is my adoo
Goodbye my lover
gooddbye my sweet treat
goodbye baby
Ill aleays love you.


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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-08-17 08:17 PM


Oh, Blue, are you sure there is no hope? I often feel like giving up, but then another crumb is dropped for me, and off I go again. Sweet and sad poem.
cat...

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-08-18 07:44 AM


Heartbreaking poem. I hope it's not true at this time for you.

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-18 09:43 AM


Blue... I'm really sorry.. really...
I caused my friend the same heartache but I didn't mean to, I wanted to love him but I just couldn't... and now he says he gave up hope and it made me very sorry.
Hope your friend is as sorry as I am now.

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