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lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-08-17 04:59 PM

Reflection

In my lonely world of mirrors
I dreamed up an emerald river
That slept its way
Through the crimson daze
Of poppy fields
Through the golden rain
Of October leaves
Beneath the crack
Of Winter's freeze
And through the scent
Of a primrose breeze
In my world of mirrors
I slept alone
By an emerald river
Dreaming of another time
When another's eyes
Reflected mine

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

1 posted 2000-08-17 05:02 PM

Ok, can we say full body chill accompanied by goosebumps? Great piece, lotharingia!!!

((HUGS))

Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken.
~Lil OnE~

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

2 posted 2000-08-17 05:45 PM

i really like this one lotty

glad to see you posting

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-08-17 06:03 PM

Enjoyed reading this and the images it created...James

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

4 posted 2000-08-17 08:13 PM

*wipes the tears from her eyes* How beautiful! How beautiful! Wow!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-08-17 08:24 PM

Yes, I concur, very beautiful and touching.
cat...

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

6 posted 2000-08-17 09:16 PM

Apt title... another time, another place? Thoroughly enjoyed this one of yours Uta

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

7 posted 2000-08-17 09:41 PM

This is so beautiful....I just can't find words to describe how it made me feel. Hardrock

T.Rose
Junior Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 20

8 posted 2000-08-18 02:04 AM

touching I enjoyed this very much. I do love poems that reflect thoughts and feelings and your poem does...

[This message has been edited by T.Rose (edited 08-18-2000).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2000-08-18 07:00 AM

Lotharingia, I loved it especially
I slept alone
By an emerald river
Dreaming of another time
When another's eyes
Reflected mine
Isn't that always the way you don't know what you've got till it's gone. :P

Be well
Kethry.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Forrest Cain
Member

since 2000-04-21

Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA

10 posted 2000-08-18 10:42 AM

Lotharingia, very different and sadly
haunting. I especially liked

Beneathe the crack
of winters freeze.

Strong images, weaving time and color
into almost memories and longings
for a certain something. Nice write.

forrest

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

11 posted 2000-08-18 12:02 PM

so beautiful and the reflection is a perfect title. Every word sent images . I enjoyed this is a very touching poem.

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

12 posted 2000-08-18 01:43 PM

I found this very beautiful and haunting. Also loved all the wonderful colours.

(Are you having a "rainbow phase" at the moment Uta? - If so, the resulting work is very beautiful!)

allan

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