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darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2000-08-17 04:12 PM


Alone

Sit by myself
Eyes on the phone
Alone
Willing it to ring
A song I sing
One from the heart
My life falling apart
No one cares
No one is there
I am alone
Make my way through
Stupid things, all I do
I need someone else
Can’t handle this
Alone
Someone needs to help
I can’t help myself
But I am still
Alone


© Copyright 2000 Danielle Zumstein - All Rights Reserved
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-08-17 04:23 PM


This rings a bell! ('scusing the pun)
What a wonderful expression of Loneliness and despair.
If it's about you, don't forget that we're all here, though!        
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Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo




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lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
2 posted 2000-08-17 04:25 PM


PS
Dig the name. My sister's boyfriend's film company is called darkstar too!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-17 04:30 PM


Aaaaahhhhh.....Beautiful, sincere, touching... I love it. Sometimes I feel the same.
Hope you won't soon.  

Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
4 posted 2000-08-18 07:49 AM


You're not alone! We'll always be there for you!!

love, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2000-08-18 07:54 AM


Darkstar,
Hold out your hand and take it in mine
Thousands of friends wait for you to shine
As long as you trust you're never alone
we'll gently ihiold you in a circle called home.

Be well
Kethry.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

6 posted 2000-08-18 08:47 AM


darkstar... you've expressed a feeling very well here... take care.
~ Tara ~

Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
7 posted 2000-08-18 12:16 PM


This was very much felt. I guess we all feel alone at times even in this world of so many people. Yet it only takes one to fill the loneliness.
darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
8 posted 2000-08-18 03:20 PM


Thanks everybody...

Dark Star

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