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...she just can't stop them...
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...she just can't stop them... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Trapped in her own mind she just can't stand up The voices keep screaming and she just can't stop them Those hands keep grabbing for her life She tries to fight them but she just can't stop them She can't stop the demons that control her life She tries to ignore them only she just can't stop them She can't get rid of them can't get them out She's turning crazy still she can't stop them Nobody can see the hell she's going through And nobody can help her help her stop them Inside she is dying but she tries to pull through There's not much left now cause she still hasn't stopped them And doubt she ever will so she must decide live on like this or not maybe it's time to stop... |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
That's really good...I liked it a lot. Dark Star |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
thanks...my happy mood is kinda losing it's power I guess.... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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For you I'll hate New Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5 |
seen that before ..... =) I wish thee eternal happines and joy in live! "make yourself all honey, and the flies will devour you" |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hehe....:P "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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the applicant New Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 8england |
~virgin suicide, i loved this piece. wow. it was so intense. Nobody can see the hell she's going through And nobody can help her help her stop them nice silverchair signature too! xx "Is my life so intriguing? Is it for this you widen your eye-rings?" ~sylvia plath~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
thanks! yeah, its silverchair, just love that part of miss you love kinda think the poem is about myself I guess....sorry people...it'll be a long time before you'll see a happy poem from my hand again.... btw applicant, is your fav sc song also suïcidal dream?? cuz it's definitely mine!! love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Beenie Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 27WVa |
I was not aware that you knew me so well...... as a matter of fact, I didn't know you knew me at all! Your poem describes the hell I live in quite well....... Beenie |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
well, I wasn't either.... love, Virgin Suïcide.. "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
You have described me here however we can never stop I myself must always push on I hurt likethis but it would hurt so many others for me to go. Great jOb Blue |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hang in there, dear, you know,what real option is there, except to keep trying to be happy. And every once in awhile it works. But don't think I have not been in that place many times, so many that its ridiculous, and still kind of there, but I can fight it better now for some reason as I get older. Take care. Keep writing. cat.. Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Thanks Cat! and bluebrdy65, I know it is kinda weak to stop and leave others alone, but what if there's no other option? what if no one can help to ease the pain and the feelings, the thoughts etc? and maybe you will hurt other people, but what if they are hurting you too, by not understanding you and just say things that make no sense... I know, I'm not helping anyone with this post, but it's just my point of view at the moment I guess... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Virgin my dear - HUG's, you've brought beauty into my life in both your happy and sad poems. I love the intense way you write. Keep it up. Hopefully I be hear to listen to your sorrow and give you some in return. It is the darkness that make's the dawn's light brighter. It is the sorrow that raises in each of us, the fighter. Be well Keth.< !signature--> "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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