Dark Poetry #2 |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Close your eyes And let me take you To the darkness of eternity Don’t look back Take what you can And see what you´ll do Don’t mind other thoughts Think about yourself Nevermind the people Be yourself the way you want live Not the way they want you to do Ignore the sounds, the thoughts, the looks Let me guide you Follow me Into the light Open your eyes "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Really good...I'd let you take me...but I can't ignore the people... Dark Star |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
heyhey, after a long time you will be able too...first,I couldn't either, but after a long period, I finally could.... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
REally enjoyed this one, very good advice, Don’t mind other thoughts Think about yourself Nevermind the people Be yourself the way you want live Not the way they want you to do Ignore the sounds, the thoughts, the looks "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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the applicant New Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 8england |
~virgin, yeh! the sentiments in this poem were the blood in my veins when i was still in school. it took me along time to convince myself to Ignore the sounds, the thoughts, the looks but i managed it. its a constant battle, and i'd love to come with you. screw 'em all! i also love the bleak romanticism in this piece.< !signature--> "Is my life so intriguing? Is it for this you widen your eye-rings?" ~sylvia plath~ [This message has been edited by the applicant (edited 08-16-2000).] |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Thanks to all of you...Well, I managed to ignore it all, but I still haven't seen the light...guess my life is made to be in darkness.. < !signature-->love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... [This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Virgin, even a life in darkness, is better than no life at all. Good poem. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
guess it is...sometimes.... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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