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ilph
Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 78

0 posted 2000-08-14 09:04 PM

Two minds greet
One is nice and one is sweet
Says nice to sweet "together we might meet"
"no" replied sweet "we cannot meet,
it would turn sour then I wouldn't be sweet
and you wouldn't be nice and that wouldn't be neat"

Two minds talk
One is blackboard and one is chalk
Says blackboard to chalk "together we could walk"
"no" replied chalk "we should not walk,
it could dissolve then we couldn't talk
and you could fall and we could balk"

Two minds know
One is cold and one is snow
Says cold to snow "together we would glow"
"no" replied snow "we might not glow,
it might melt then we might feel woe
and you might heat and this thing might go"

Two minds unite
One is stars and one is night
Says stars to night "together we are right"
"yes" replied night "we are right,
it is in the stars that twinkle in the night
and forever shine and the future is bright"

Two people true
One is me and one is you
Says me to you "together we made it through"
"yes" replied you "we are here that's true,
it is just like we thought it is me and you
but now what is it that we are meant to do?"

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

1 posted 2000-08-14 09:19 PM

Oh, so clever and touching. The best part about things like this is sometimes not knowing what to do afterwards. Just take it as it comes and be happy, follow your heart, and you will figure it out.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-08-14 10:03 PM

Very creative, I like this a lot.
catalinamoon

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2000-08-15 01:06 AM

Hmm... very nice - great expression (as usual)... take care

~ Tara ~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2000-08-15 08:42 AM

ilph,
I'm in two minds about this I think I like it but maybe I'm just fooling myself.
Be well
Kethry.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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