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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
VS you asked me to post but i dont have any of my poems with me so i am just gonna see what comes to mind... ~Disregarded~ you look at me like that your hurting me you look at me like this please disregard me you laugh at me and taunt your words in mind do haunt you take away my soul as if it were the toll for you to pretend love please disregard me you take away my smile your happy for a while now your back again go ahead and take it all you love me hardly please disregard me i can't take it anymore you i live to die for Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
ok so yeha i just read this back to myself and it really does suck...hmmm i'll edit it later or something... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hey, great one again Nik! just glad that I know it's not about me or something!  you should forget those people that are treating you like that, there are a lot of people in the world who give love and don't want anything back in return, just because they LOVE YOU! and you are loved, I just know you are...everyone is, but they just don't yet see the people who are there...but they'll show you, when the time is there I guess...maybe this time is to feel alone or something, so in a while, when those people come, you can fully enjoy of it...maybe... not like I have got all the answers, but I try my best to make you feel a bit better... And thanks for your poem, I enjoyed reading it... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
IT DOESNT SUCK NIK!!!! "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Nikolette... this is far far from sucking. It was really good! I liked it a lot. Keep up the great work... I've loved all of your poetry, just to let you know  Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hey Nik, this is a good poem. Dark but not as scary as some of your stuff. Glad to see you are still writing, kepp it up. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wooooohaaaaaaa!!!! Nik, I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner, just noticed it. It's great, especially: "...you love me hardly please disregard me I can't take it anymore you I live to die for" Especially the last line touched me deep inside, Thanks! |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
well since you guys like it i guess i wont change it... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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