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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
So many bottles All sizes and shapes I'm walking for hours All around me I gaze Dolce & Gabbana, Jean Paul Gaultier, Apollo, Aristo, Maybe Guerlain? Intoxicated already Confused by the names I'm getting a headache From another fragrance... I'm not giving up To find it I came In fantasies temple Your heavenly smell... To arrouse no suspicion I didn't ask What cologne you're using? What's the name of the flask? You belong to another I don't have the right So discretely I wander, But later tonight... To feel your subtle Presence in my room I'll buy me a bottle Of your favourite perfume. Something to lift up the mood... Or something... [This message has been edited by LM (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
This is so scentingly sweet and written so very well, just precious! I enjoyed it throughly!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks Alibaster  I wrote it like in 20 minuts..... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, great thought. I have always had a very strong connection with the fragrance a man wears, and years later it can bring me right back to that space with him. What a fun idea. catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I scents this is a great poem, but don't nose why.  Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Oh yeah! Great poem! |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Catalinamoon: thanks for your comment, same with me Kethry: Hehe... Thanks! Tara: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh this is perfect. How very sweet. I have done this sort of thing. You have written so well of it. Take care. *Peace. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks SpitFire It was on my mind all day... so I went and almost did it again...  Couldn't find it. |
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