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Dark Poetry #2

Never as goodbye

Kirsty24
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 40
Australia

0 posted 2000-08-12 11:53 PM

To meet with you face to face
Is something I thought a dream?
But to know it will really happen
Makes me happier then it may seem

For all the lovers I have left behind
I now save myself for you
The one man that is in my life
The special one who loves me true

Though at times we may be weak
From the oceans that pull us apart
The one-thing oceans can never take
Is the love I give from my heart?

But when the time comes to say farewell
I'll try my hardest not to cry
Remember it as sees you soon
And never as goodbye!

[This message has been edited by Kirsty24 (edited 08-12-2000).]

kat
Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 387

1 posted 2000-08-13 12:05 PM

This was very sweet and beautiful. Long distance love is always hard. I can attest to that myself. Great job!

kat

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-08-13 12:26 PM

I also understand the feelings here Kirsty. Very nice poem.
catalinamoon

Kirsty24
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 40
Australia

3 posted 2000-08-13 02:01 AM

Thanks guys. The relationship is long over but he still has a plce in my heart and is still a great friend

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

4 posted 2000-08-13 05:55 AM

Lovely

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2000-08-13 06:11 AM

Nice poem, glad you are not holding bitterness in your heart even though he holds a special place.
Be Well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Kirsty24
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 40
Australia

6 posted 2000-08-13 11:56 PM

I held bitterness in my heart for long enough. Now I have moved on and am engaged to a very loving man that holds my heart and soul in his very hands...(stop rambling Kirsty)

I am pleased you all enjoyed the poem.

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