Dark Poetry #2 |
Addiction |
Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
hopefully this one wont get taken down like the others... ~Addiction~ this world is non fiction like my addiction all alone a tortured soul two parts become one whole divided by a wall of hate no motive for debate cant stand this addiction lost all convictions diving into worthlessness i wish i was fictious a maze of distruction logic has no function release has come at last time goes by so fast all i need is pain to relieve this hellish strain blade drops to the floor now i need some more i just feel the need the true need to bleed i'll hold back for you today but it doesn't matter anyway because it might change tommorrow i might feel more sorrow than i feel today i hate feeling this way. with this addiction the feelings never stay. i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Wow!! I know a little..... Thank you! Click |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
wow great poem I've been there too it'll get better LOVE ELMO |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
really? cuz i have been there my whole life and its not seeming to get better i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nik, I am so worried about you, please don't give up. We are here for you, as much as strangers can be. And Elmo is right, it will get better. I do know the feeling that it seems like so much more good than bad in your life, but there is always hope, and that is how to keep going. Keep hoping. And you have a talent for writing,which may someday bring you some happiness. Take care. Sandra |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm.. very emotional indeed... expressed well. Take care. ~ Tara ~ |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Addiction is a !@#$%^&*()!@, thats for sure. No matter what you're addicted to, been there. Great job here tho, hang in there, things do get better.< !signature--> Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find [This message has been edited by LOTR (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Addiction is a !@#$%^&*()!@, thats for sure. No matter what you're addicted to, been there. Great job here tho, hang in there, things do get better. Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nik I agree with the others. Things do get better.You just have to keep working through it a day/hour/minute at a time. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
We should make some kind of support group...(we could call it "people who shouldn't have access to razor blades"...or some s*** like that...) Good poem...it's cool. Dark Star |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Nik....big hugssssss and there are many addictions in life...some worse than others but all making time seem to stand still to suffer a bit longer than any one wishes to or should ~~smiles for you Maureen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
DAMN Nik...do I gotta get that coat out of my closet? Dont make me do that girl...I am ALWAYS here. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thanks everyone for your replies...i hope you liked this poem oh and paula you better take that white coat off...and stay away from with with that straight jacket...i'm not crazy anymore!!! Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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