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Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

0 posted 2000-08-11 11:11 PM

~Wrong~

she always tells me
i am wrong
why is it that
i dont belong
i've felt this way
for way too long
they always say
i have to be strong

you make me use the blade
you make me feel the shame
you say your so ashamed
all i feel is pain

you make judgements
you call names
you bring hatrid
you bring pain

i love you too much to hate you
i try but i can't make you
love me without faking
the person that i am

Nikolette Sadness

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

1 posted 2000-08-11 11:24 PM

That's a really good poem. Very sad. Who is "she"?

Dark Star

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

2 posted 2000-08-11 11:26 PM

'she' is my mother...

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

3 posted 2000-08-12 01:47 AM

and you hold me in your arms and then you say

i think we're alone now doesn't seem to be anyone around, i think we're alone now, the beating of our hearts is the only sound

LOTR
Member

since 2000-07-31

Posts 68
New Jersey

4 posted 2000-08-12 04:07 AM

So much pain in these words! you get across emotion amazingly in this.

Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

5 posted 2000-08-12 07:14 AM

hey girl, you keep it up there will you!
hang on!!

lotsa love, Virgin Suïcide...

And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back..........

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2000-08-12 07:46 AM

Hang in there Nik, Things do get better I promise.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Click
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 202
USA

7 posted 2000-08-12 06:33 PM

Hey, Nik, You have the words that move people!! Good poetry.
Thanx!

Click

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