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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia 
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Dear child with gifted sight Take my hand,please follow Into dreamtime we will take flight And give no heed to tomorrow In whimsical daydreams we hold control Matters not if we are awake or sleeping "With no regrets,and wings on our souls" We'll soar above sorrow and weeping Over time I've watched your light wane Soon darkness shall consume But I know a place where is no pain Where the sun shall nurture the moon For every soul in this vast universe Are united deep within And every heart shares every verse That flows from poet to pen And in this realm of spirit and heart You'll always be in safe embrace As sacred friends we are all a small part Of your inspirational hiding place So in the night when you've retired to bed And loneliness aches inside Please close your eyes and clear your head And into dreamtime we'll go, side by side. ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Wonderful poem...it's just line after line of hopeful beauty....something that's always a pleasure to read...especially when everything else feels so dark. It reminds me of the prizes of hanging in there.  Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Thank You Angel! I know that here in Dark Passions we are all expressing pain in many forms....but there is an escape...even if only a short time. thank you again! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Very beautiful poem and thought, but if only it was so simple.... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this one, Dawn. Good thoughts to keep us all going. I've been a bit discouraged lately, wondering if anyone cares or sees the writing, That was a good reminder. Catalinamoon |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
LM: thank you so much for the comment! thats true, it may not be that simple, but it still can be done! we just have to let down our walls! catalinamoon:thank you very much! always know,that any time you express emotions in any way, there will always be someone to hear you...even when those words are left unsaid, still there is someone who can hear you....and dear poet...your words always shine brightly, we'll never look you over! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dawn, I like and the sun shall nurture the moon. It reminds me a bit of passions where those who have heaps of talent nurture those who are beginning to discover their voice. Be well Keth "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Dawn.... Your words are like magic that take the shadows away..... Very enjoyable reading!< !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Kethry: yes, i too believe we should all try to nurture and encourage one another. thanks for the reply! Sunny1: thank you very much..we all need to get out of the shadows once in awhile,even if its only for a brief moment. ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Wow what a wonderful poem...so sad yet so compelling...a yeanring from within that says, "Yes, lets go". "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Such a beautiful poem and so beautifully written. I really enjoyed this one. kat |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nicely crafted poetry, truely enjoyable to read. Gloom |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Kat: thank you for that! Gloom: thank you..well crafted sounds very good to me! thanks again! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Very Nice PP Deepak |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Deepak: thank you very much! ~Dawn |
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