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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
some strange disorder dark, swirling, purple, grey fog, wind, cloud... a periodic problem unnamed, unknown some weird depression it sets in unseen, creeping, so sleek and slow slithering on airy feet doctors have names but you know it is just a dark, swirling, purple grey fog, wind, cloud... that catches you unaware on a day when you're lonely. [This message has been edited by Portia (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I just read this several times....really slowly..and it's so cool. Try it. Read it nice and slow and smell every line. Very neat post. That'll do it. Take care. *Peace. |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Wow, SF, thank you. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I did Spit and your right, it does make a diff. this is ?? I just don't know?? it just hit so home to me as you know kid. Thank you for sharing this. love ya kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
now this a big wow its great and its about what your thinking thanks for shareing with us. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I got goosebumps reading this. Great poem  |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
Peaceful, beautiful nightmares. For the memories - Thankyou. |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
The colors seem to have meaning though, suggesting that it is "something." Nice poem. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Portia.....VERY well done.....I see you have been there...you have to go to see all the colors....and yes, the fog does come and the colors swirl. Most enjoyable.....thanks for sharing. Hardrock |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
 Waaayyy cool.Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
very descriptive. well written. really enjoyed the poem. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
i love this. You describe the feeling well. i think many of us have felt exactly what you describe here,and if the rest are like me,have no concept of how to put it into words. this is completely accurate and i'm grateful for the realization of my own thoughts put in words. swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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