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What hatred lurks within
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What hatred lurks within |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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WHAT HATRED LURKS WITHIN Far above me they all seem to float So easily and carelessly around Pretty but cheap How unfear it is I deserve better than this Still I crawl deep blow them On both hands and knees Only to recieve their cruelness and mockery Inhibited by their shallowness and trickery But I will arise, strong and solid And I'll make them hate 'emselves Just like they made me hate myself The sweetness of vengeance I'll finally taste When the day of *****-feast arrives I'll release the beast within I'll show you, you'll see, you'll fear And surely, you will be sorry You may beg forgiveness But you won't be spared |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
"the sweetness of vengence I'll finally taste." kick ass!  EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
This is a great poem for masochists to get off on Broken! Wooo, scary... (But always remember "Revenge is a dish best served cold...") |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I love this poem Broken...I really do. Sorry that I haven't replied to your past poems but I haven't really been around but I did read them. You really have a way with words my friend...nice to see them here again. Please don't let them consume you...now that would be a sweet revenge. Take care!Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Anger is a better servant than it is a master.....but what a fine line... Click |
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