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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-08-09 08:56 PM


As certain as shutting out the lights--
and shutting door behind...
this woman took the best of you--
locked windows then she drew the blind.
All I saw, was what could be--
the architecture sound...
I felt a home discovered me,
I felt that I'd been found.
Nails were left for photo's rest,
in pattern down the hall...
and then I spied the weep of lies--
tears flowed down the wall.
Then the cold came creeping in,
carpet, stained with blood of love,
moaning, from the ceiling, high--
I dared not look above...

I cannot stay.
I break this lease.
I'll pray for you
to find some peace.
I'll beg the gods,
"un-do" this spell...
But I will leave,
attractive hell...

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
1 posted 2000-08-09 09:13 PM


WOW!!  I liked the way this read...thank you!

Click



SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-08-09 10:40 PM


~Serenity,...Damn!!! Gosh, am I ever enjoying your visits here. This is creative. It's just too cool you. Take care. *Peace.
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2000-08-10 12:45 PM


You certainly have your share of bad luck serenity ... the bright side is how well you write about it

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-08-10 04:45 AM


I spied the weep of lies...

WOW, serenity WOW

regards,
sudhir

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

5 posted 2000-08-10 08:55 PM


thank you all so much, and Rex, it's more bad judgement than it is bad luck...I always choose to ignore the obvious, and pay for it later...but you gotta try, I think...

so thanks to all...and I am enjoying it here.

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