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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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As certain as shutting out the lights-- and shutting door behind... this woman took the best of you-- locked windows then she drew the blind. All I saw, was what could be-- the architecture sound... I felt a home discovered me, I felt that I'd been found. Nails were left for photo's rest, in pattern down the hall... and then I spied the weep of lies-- tears flowed down the wall. Then the cold came creeping in, carpet, stained with blood of love, moaning, from the ceiling, high-- I dared not look above... I cannot stay. I break this lease. I'll pray for you to find some peace. I'll beg the gods, "un-do" this spell... But I will leave, attractive hell... |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
WOW!! I liked the way this read...thank you! Click |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Serenity,...Damn!!! Gosh, am I ever enjoying your visits here. This is creative. It's just too cool you. Take care. *Peace. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You certainly have your share of bad luck serenity ... the bright side is how well you write about it  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I spied the weep of lies... WOW, serenity WOW regards, sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you all so much, and Rex, it's more bad judgement than it is bad luck...I always choose to ignore the obvious, and pay for it later...but you gotta try, I think... so thanks to all...and I am enjoying it here. |
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