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Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire

0 posted 2000-08-09 01:18 PM




Almost is..
The closest word
Next to many things

Almost can lead to
Joyous times..
Or the tragedy
It brings

Almost here
Almost there..
I cannot tell you
Why..

It is that you
May almost laugh
Or that you
Almost cry

I only know
Almost for me..
Was more than a
Close call

With friends in hand
We took a stand..
And rose above it all

So for today
Almost has changed..
It's more than
A mere word

Almost means
That I came close..
But you my friends
Were heard...


Thank you both for holding my hand....One never forgets kindness
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The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

[This message has been edited by Deborah1 (edited 08-09-2000).]

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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-08-09 01:22 PM


lovely...

I can understand the feelings behind this one for sure....

great work, deborah...

regards,
sudhir

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-08-09 01:56 PM


It's not difficult to hold a hand reached out to you...you reached, I was there.  And I'm glad I was.  Be well...that's a wish.   Hardrock
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-08-09 01:57 PM


Anytime, dear. And thank God it was only an almost. Nice poem, written from the heart
Sandra / aka  Cat...

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

4 posted 2000-08-09 09:14 PM


What a sweet poem! I want to be your friend too, after reading that post! You really care about your friends, and I like that in a person!  
Great poem! Keep smileing!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-08-09 10:19 PM


~Deborah,...you sweet thang you!  Almost,...that word there,...if you let it linger,....could be a poem in itself. This is great! This work of yours, this expression. *Sigh*,...it's like a nice feeling in your heart that things worked out through the help of friends. Awesome! Take care. *Peace.
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
6 posted 2000-08-09 11:00 PM


Thank you everyone!! I hold my friends tight, near and dear to my heart..to me that is priceless!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
7 posted 2000-08-10 05:03 AM


What a perfect poem!
Perfect sentiments, perfect words.
And how nice that there sometimes are hands that hold and are held!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



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