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meara
Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-08-07 08:08 PM


One may not live for
many things but does
that make him not
worth the gold at the
end of the rainbow.
To live for things does
differ from what they
will die to protect:
a child's life
one's self respect
or one's own true values
either which may be held
high above others heads not
to have or to hold which only
shall be seen with others eyes.
Which is worth living or dying for.

© Copyright 2000 Lisa Ritchey - All Rights Reserved
allan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
1 posted 2000-08-08 02:32 PM


Mmmmm dense meaning here, lots of words packed in... I like your style. (Also liked how your poem takes an hour-glass shape!)  

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