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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
white winter darkness breathes its soul and spits out its heart into a trembleing earth within a embryo of blood spattered on the purest snow the seed of your heart sleeps waiting to flower kimi wo shinjiteru i belive in you to shine like a passionate star in the darkness of the heavens like the wind that steals the tears from my eyes your soul sweeps down from the sky and falls to the ground as snow your own intentions bury the vacent shell of what you once were you color the snow red with your love kimi wo shinjiteru i belive in you to burn like a lonely star in the emptey void of the heavens so now i guess its goodbye but not forever only for the fleeting moment that is life we part on such a winter day when the sky is clear and bright i will look up to see you bleeding light across black infinity kimi wo shinjiteru i belive we will meet again when the distent stars chime their love song in the depths of heaven |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wren,...how and where do I begin with an explanation of my fondness for this poem. Yes,...it reads so like the message it holds. I too truly enjoy the japanese?...such a lovely touch you add,...that pleases me so. Mmhm,...like to see more of you. Take care. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Beautiful, Wren. Again.  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wren, this is lovely, lyrical, magical even, but I wax poetic.lol Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Like the wind that steals the tears from my eyes...this is a poem that comes with a sense of beauty..I truly enjoyed it!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wren, this was unusual and very beautiful. I liked it, and it gives you a good feeling, even in its sadness. Cat.... Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Very beautiful Wren! Deepak |
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