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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
When the darkness in your soul seeps through To throw a curtain over the light of your day When the fears of losing me over whelm you And your staggering footsteps lose the way Then think of the moments you spent with me And the caresses we exchanged soft and tender And through the windows of your inner soul You will again experience that lost splendor Deepak |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Well deepak, this is way beyond just a thought... Well written one... regards, sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is not just a thought it is fragrant memories, that cause the face to unwittingly smile. Lovely work. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Yes - In fact memories - but the title came because I just had a thought as I logged into the forum and wrote it on the spot - and the thought was - How little we need to make ourselves feel happy - but often forget that the key lies within ourselves and spend our time lamenting... just a thought - Thanks Sudhir and Kethry |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Deepak, Just a thought..how that can turn into something wonderful and it did here..I can honestly say I share in the "thoughts" and how important it is to think about the valuble things in our lives. So glad you wrote this!! Very nice and says alot!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Ahhh, memories. Sometimes they are what keep me going. Yet better still is the prospect of creating new memories. Well written. Sing while you may -The Prophet Qa'sepel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Qa'sepel |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is sooo dreamy. What melancholia! Wonderful! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
this is just beautifully exquisite!!!! i really loved this!!! you have a true poets heart. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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