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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-08-07 02:07 AM


"elevate, the people that you hate. you cut yourself again" Silverchair

~Low self esteem~

hurt my self esteem a little
come on cut me down a bit
your hurt my self esteem a little
you make me feel like this

youre supposed to love me
unconditionally
youre supposed to love me
love me for me

you call me that name i hate
and then you say you love me
i swear now its too late
i still need you to love me

i hate who i want to be,
who you think i should be.
why must everyone hate me?
why must i hate me?

Nikolette Sadness



i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-08-07 02:37 AM


First off, this is another fantastic poem! A slice right out of the contradictions in the human mind.
And second, I don't hate you!

  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



Nikolette Sadness
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2 posted 2000-08-07 02:40 AM


i;m always gald to see you here lotty!!!
thanks  
Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Nikolette Sadness
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3 posted 2000-08-07 01:17 PM


i'm not the poster child for depression i swear!
Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
4 posted 2000-08-07 07:19 PM


Chipper up! Men are like parachutes, if their not there the first time, chances are you wont need them again.   Trust me, I  am one of the jerks.  
Good poem.  And please remember that you’ve got nothing but friends (who undoubtedly face the same problems) here at DP.



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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-08-07 07:44 PM


Yes, Nik, what he said   We are all here for you. And don't let this guy push you around,you don't deserve it.
Also love the poem.
Take care
cat....

Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art.
Merrit Malloy


Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
6 posted 2000-08-11 02:00 PM


hey, know what you're talking about....
"youre supposed to love me
love me for me"

need that sometimes too....but then they just leave you......like always....


And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back..........

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
7 posted 2000-08-11 07:54 PM


wow great poem my feeling exactly Love Elmo <3
LOTR
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since 2000-07-31
Posts 68
New Jersey
8 posted 2000-08-12 04:14 AM


Once again you've brought out emotions in a sharp way through your words. This is a gift in you and I hope to see more of it. channel this with something possitive and you'll hit greatness.
               Richi
P.s. and I don't hate you either


Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
9 posted 2000-08-12 08:03 AM


I think the last line says it all Why must I hate me. " Why must you indeed?"
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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