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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Overwhelmed by it all, left hollow by my own dagger I cry translucent tears left unknown to their eyes and my mind screams the words I'm too afraid to say but I need you to know - somehow Did you hear the whispered I love yous that words and laughter tried so hard to hide? The seams of my spirit broken by the swelling of my emotions What I once stood upon gone, lost in shadows and doubt I reach out in the black unknown for some strength but I'm going dry, slipping through my fingers as I claw for it franticly I won't give up this fight but I grow so tired of my weary life I pray to God for help down here, A way to fill in the empty space within me To heal my heart of it's lethal wounds The blood dripping constantly, flooding my head and washing away my hope I'm so afraid... I don't want to die alone, alone and unheard Right now I feel more alone than I ever have in my entire life I lack confidence in my courage, in my ability to endure such devisation and continue as a walking secret But they don't appreciate the truth so I'm left with the agony to handle with complete grace and beauty With my head up and swinging my hips Oh how I wish I could tell you but I'm too busy smiling Maybe someday my pride'll permit me to tell you how I feel but for now I'll leave you to your life Should you need me, I'm never too far so just call You'll find me in a blue cloud composed of darkness, my sanctuary I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You my dear are the queen of darkness. This poem is just so hot that I cannot even began to measure its tempature. Thank you for sharing your gifts with us.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
The seams of my spirit broken by the swelling of my emotions. I love this part. Sucha a powerful poem. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you both very, very much. Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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jerralynne Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 11 |
"and my mind screams the words I'm too afraid to say but I need you to know - somehow Did you hear the whispered I love yous that words and laughter tried so hard to hide?" ohmigod ~ this was me ~ this is me ~ i felt my eyes widen as i read your poem ~ thank you so much ~ i once did try to be forthright & honest with myself & with him & conquer these types of fears ~ no reply ~ perhaps that is why these feelings are so universal ~ jerralynne |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
I'm so afraid... I don't want to die alone, alone and unheard Right now I feel more alone than I ever have in my entire life ******* Your best poem I think, atleast of the ones I've read. You said it all, and I'm stunned by admiration. If only I could write something like this. Oh well, take care D.E ~Broken~ A crimson pool, so warm and deep Lulls me to an endless sleep Your hand in mine, -I will be brave Take me from this earth An endless night,-thi |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
i go with all others, this one is terribly good, "I'm so afraid... I don't want to die alone, alone and unheard Right now I feel more alone than I ever have in my entire life" you will never be alone... luv, Virgin Suïcide And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i as well see myself in this poem...you did a fantastic job! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Same here, I do know this feeling well. I hope you are not as sad as this poem. Keep the faith. Great writing Cat... |
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