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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
On the deathbed of light Beauty might make the world look more sane(like a ~human~ on fire in love with the flames) Lie to me....i am sure..meaning steals everything I live for Vapar people waaa vvve on by.... with their suits and vIolent/vibrant minds (CAN SEE BUT CANT BE,CAN SEEEEE BUT CANT BE..) upOn the tower of watered down Oblivion is rocking slowly to what little .. lives inside of me (the sound of innocence draining hits like a bullet to the brain..in stark contrast to the softness ignored for a heart that can no longer admit.. pain ) "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything" "I am too connected to you to Slip away, to fade away. Days away I still feel you Touching me, changing me, And considerately killing me." The Jackal |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You can feel the pain hon, that is evident in this great piece!! Love the style, the flow, the feeling in this... Great work  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Did you get burnt. So sorry to hear if that's the case. Great poem though. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Whoa!!! That is it. Whoa. You have reached me. I love your way of expressing this. Mmm. More please. Be well. *Peace. |
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