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Hollow body |
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
Ridged times, of past deslave Hollow body, depict this theme The sun became black, and rose at the sea A fog that seeped, into this place Kept well with the mist, of red decay One to approach, shall never leave Weakness is hunted, and sorrow is seiged Placing a candle, beside my only dream I try to invision, a place of revene Trust is for victims, and rights for their slaves Imprisonment is leathal, controling one's brain Like a scientific experiment, of feelings in vane Caught, but not surviving, my mind has seen it's day Eerie this enchantment, does not lessen any pain This road I have traveled, has taken over me Like my existence has vanished, but my memory still remains |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I really liked the imaging in this.  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Is this the road less travelled or a ghost of yourself. Be well "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Placing a candle, beside my own dream..I feel a lost soul here..This was well done!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Courtney, I liked this one a lot also. Images very strong and emotional. Catalinamoon |
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