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Will He Visit?
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Will He Visit? |
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E. Benjamin Roy Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 12 |
Tic toc, the clock said, Will He Visit? Mist laying on the gound, Will He Visit? Pain in the air, Will He Visit? Shining sickle, He is here...DEATH!!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
yes waiting for this cold hearted death, is time consuming, and it does come to all. unless you know something I don't. this is short and sweet. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Short and to the point, good!!  Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem. tho i do not fear death. cause joel i do know something you don't i guess each of us here will live on for ever as long as theres someone here to read are words. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
An abrupt and suprising ending for one waiting for death. I'm still thinking on this. |
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