Dark Poetry #2 |
I Have Been Chosen |
sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
I have been chosen to feel... the pain of rejection, the heartache of loss, the searing resentment no matter the cost. The warmth of a kiss, The passion so wild, the carnal indulgence of one nature's child. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sash, I am here with you on this one, as well. Very precisely stated, and so true. Catalinamoon Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Sash, Very nice work here. I especially like the last line, it flows perfectly. Keep up the good work, neighbor! Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
What a wonderful little poem! Give me feeling above not-feeling any day! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh,...even the title stings. Nice writing. Short and packed. Take care S. *Peace. |
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