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How Can I Stay? |
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Squirter Junior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 17Minnesota |
Right now I want to die I can't keep up this lie Everyone sees a happy face The outside is satin and lace I'd like to stick around to hear each and every sound of my friend's happiness and joy there's even one special boy! I always try to do my best But can I ever save the rest? There's many children I need to save But can I do it before I reach my grave? I can't fight this growing feeling Right now death seems so appealing I can't believe I'm writing this Why can't I just slit my wrists? Can someone help me see What it takes to be me? I think I have a scary disease Can some help me? Anyone? Please? [This message has been edited by Squirter (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
This poem really touched me - please do feel free to email me and I will help in any way I can. there are wonderful people here at this site who will also help you. Whatever you do don't choose suicide. We will help you and give you all the support we can. Hang in there okay? Allan  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very emotional writing...from experience the way you make it is stop dwelling on the negative and hold onto any little shred of hope that you can see...the light shining thru the darkness...take care...James |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hello there,...first, Welcome here!~ Now, to this totally brimming with emotion and completely expressive writing of yours. As the others have said, I'll also give you all the support that I can. I do hope things are atleast alright. Please be well S. *Peace. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Sounds like you're going thru some pretty tough times. I'd be willing to assist you. I will pray for you. You can email me, as well, if you wish, at the following address [email protected]  May God bless you and comfort you in your time of trouble. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Squirter - You've done a nice job with this, and...if you're having some problems, writing and posting your poems here is a great idea, as everyone has said, there are a lot of wonderful people here to listen. I read one of your other poems today, and I know you know who is there for you too. Remember, you're one of His many wonders!!!! Bonnie |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Oh, Squirter, this is so touchingly sad. To echo the others, please feel free to reach out to anyone...this is a wonderful place. I concur with Bonnie...writing is a good release for your emotions. I read your poem in Spiritual, and you need to remember the last line...God makes good things, He made me. You're in my prayers. Linda |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Welcome to DP, and I must repeat the others, please email me if you would like to talk. In the meantime, I think writing it out and sharing is one of the best comforts there is. You can have support anytime you come here. Please take care. Catalinamoon |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Squirter~~You Must Stay!!! Your heartfelt words have touched My heart too. I have a sixteen year old daughter who has gone through some tough times as of late. She is a treasure to me and I hate to see her sad. I'm always ready to lend an ear if You would care to talk to someone...I'd be glad to listen! [email protected] ~Sash~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Squirter, welcome to Deep Passions. And if you need to talk, contact me. Don't let the dark times take you away. Please stay here with us. Be well. Keth "There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~As everyone else has said I have been right there and if you ever need someone to talk to, someone to yell at, whatever just give me an email and Im there. And dont be shy!! (lol). You take care and take someone up on there offer if you need it~ Blessed Be, Beth |
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