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0 posted 2000-08-03 12:52 PM


Candles made from stones,

In the background you hear rattling of bones,

Snipping the wings of a dove,

Breaking the lease on peace,

Cage made of despair,

Shadows of sins bind this dove,

Locked in this cage waiting for the end of eternity.




Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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1 posted 2000-08-03 01:15 AM


hey...this was really great! i cant even pick one line out of it....i think it was beautifully written yet so sad. but i love it!...much love~
~MiSeryDivine~~

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2 posted 2000-08-03 11:39 AM



How despondent this sounds ... Nice ...

~verve

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3 posted 2000-08-26 02:46 AM


Dove symoblizes peace and I wanted it to be used as a dark object. Know what I mean?

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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