Dark Poetry #2 |
Lost Freedom |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Candles made from stones, In the background you hear rattling of bones, Snipping the wings of a dove, Breaking the lease on peace, Cage made of despair, Shadows of sins bind this dove, Locked in this cage waiting for the end of eternity. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
hey...this was really great! i cant even pick one line out of it....i think it was beautifully written yet so sad. but i love it!...much love~ ~MiSeryDivine~~ |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
How despondent this sounds ... Nice ... ~verve |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Dove symoblizes peace and I wanted it to be used as a dark object. Know what I mean? Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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