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Dark Poetry #2

Glitter Entwined

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2000-08-02 09:24 PM

Glitter Entwined

the glitter
entwined
in the decor of her

the shine of
faces

worn

spiders
in smiles hiding

undercover

beneath years
of practice

beneath one too many times

eyes
the dark of night
shaded

with stories of
burn

ashes blinding
secrets binding

a face
for today
in so many ways can sleep

heels
swollen and red
clicking

wishing

away.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-08-02 09:31 PM

SF, love it as usual. She has been wishing for too long, hm? I can feel that too well.
Peace
Cat...

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2000-08-03 01:09 AM

Weird poem, but I love it as always.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.

3 posted 2000-08-03 01:31 AM

I very much like the Wizard of Oz reference. That really brought everything together for me. Nicely done.
'You can't go back to Kansas'
-John Stewart

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Q'spel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Q'spel

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

4 posted 2000-08-03 02:46 AM

Fire,
this is soOoooOOooooOOooo good.
Wishing is what keeps us clicking away!
Somehow your poems always remind me of my sister, I don't know why ...

Lynne Dale
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria

5 posted 2000-08-03 02:59 AM

Different poem, but beautiful anyway.

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

6 posted 2000-08-03 11:42 AM

hm... i don't quite understand what this means but i like it nonetheless!

~verve

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2000-08-03 04:08 PM

Sometimes it is easier to live behind your face then to let anyone see the wishes in your eyes....great poem..love the way you wrote it!

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