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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Fragile stem of once strong rose, petals fade, no longer glow. Feel him slowly slip away, no respite at end of day. Fragrant flower crumbles now, rich blossom with small head bowed. Fragile love no longer viable, fantasies prove unreliable. Nothing left but love so torn, flower's beauty so forlorn. Fingers stained with drops of love, soaring heart falls from above. Only rose's remnants stay, fragile love again betrayed. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Oh Cat..how this crys out to my heart. Fragile flowers, fragile hearts, fragile love. Beautifully done. Hardrock |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Me too Cat, we are ever fragile aren't we? Fragile love, fragile hearts, fragile rose, fragile feelings. It hurts to lay ourselves open again, but we must if we are to find the happiness we seek. Beautiful work hon  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
This is awesome...I love how much in common I have with people here! I wrote one once called "the last rose" I alluded the same things you did. Hey maybe we share a brain?! lol..anyways, great work!!! Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Truly beautiful, sad but great. Glad I finally found some people that I can identify with on here. keep up the good work : ) Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
oh wow! this was really beautiful....i have nothing more i can say ~MiSeRyDivine~~ |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh my friend this is shows your unlimited talent. Beautiful...absolutely beautiful!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
This is wonderful...I love it. But, isn't it a testimony that in spite of the fragileness of our beings, we somehow survive? Linda |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
* sniff* tragically beautiful ... Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh KittyCat,...I breathed deeply and took this all in. It's scent lingers in the air. *sigh* Fingers stained with drops of love,...how sadly beautiful. Hhm was what I just said totally confusing? Anyway, it's mine,...I'm holding this one inside of me. Take care you. *Peace. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love the reference of the heart to the rose...so fragile both...but of the two, I think the heart is stronger...a lovely, spirit lit, but sad poem! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
beautiful...simply beautiful |
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mustlove_mstleave New Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 8 |
Awesome..yet depressing kinda felt a chill down my spine.. love so cruel...dreadful |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear dear Cat This is just so sad... the pain tears at my heart. And yet it is frighteningly familiar, something so common as to almost make us immune. Almost. As always, a real work of class and beauty. Thanks for sharing. Love Sylvia |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Awww so sad... heartwrenching stuff... well done with the writing, catalinamoon... regards, sudhir |
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