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Hallowed Be My Sufferance
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Hallowed Be My Sufferance |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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Hallowed Be My Sufferance I doubt the light would care if my black soul engulfed me in an eternal nightmare, or that the world would hear if my blood ran freely onto the floor in fear. That any one would notice if I screamed profanity with forked tongue in vengance, or that my eccentric nefarious ways will gain understanding or honey-coated praise. So I shall remain in the comfort that I know so well, where my deamons and darkness were rocked gentely as I fell. In the night with sweet mystery and the shadows dancing upon the walls... Hallowed be my sufferance with silent screams of evidence. There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
It is difficult in the light, when we are comfortable and know the dark, rocking our fears within what we know, but yes the light does care, A terrific poem so richly dark, so hauntingly at home. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is different in my view i see light in the darkness of black because i feel evil and a tidbit of a darkened heart help express oneself even better. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ooh. Good read. |
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hunter Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 22lex,ky |
your words say would anyone notice.....all would notice few would care.good job,good expressions |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I thank you all for your kind words. They are much appriciated! Jeremiah...I agree with you completely! I accept and love my darkness. It makes me what I am...and without it, I would be nothing! hunter...exactly...no one would care, but that is fine with me as long as I am rocked gentely by the dark. Joel... : }~ glad that it touched you!! I know that some one/ the light would care...maybe as I do my inner searching, I am the one who would not care if the light noticed! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
To glimpse the light is to live. To live one life, a sentence. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Powerful poem ! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
there's deep pain here, equisitely expressed too. Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear a-aliaster This poem is superb... such eloquence, yet deep, rich poetic fragrance I was impressed, and touched Keep up the good writing! |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
How very very interesting. i love it. This is really well done. Wonderful swampola And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Very well done poem.....good use of contrasts, word pix...really easy on the eyes and the mind. Enjoyed it very much.....Hardrock |
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