Dark Poetry #2 |
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Another Time, Another Place |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina ![]() |
Closing my eyes I am taken back, To another time, another place. Memories wash over me, My heart drowning in my tears. Tender kisses, Warm embraces, Images dance through my mind. It was another time, another place. Silly laughter, A stroll in gentle rain, A picnic under the elm, Fireside passion, The way you spoke my name. My soul is forever tied to yours, Pink ribbons of love, Now faded into gray. It was another time, another place. I long to be free, Imprisoned in sorrow I still remain. Such a reckless theif you were, To steal my heart, Then carelessly toss it away. So painful are the journeys, To that other time, That other place. [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
What an excellent piece!! You did a tremendous job of taking me along, nice imagery. It can be painful sometimes to remember, I know. Great JOb!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Deborah, there is no higher compliment than being able to take you along with me and for that I thank you. All the best to you, Juls |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
How well anyone with a broken heart can relate to this my dear. WoW! I have been there a few times myself. I loved it. Dee |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Dedreia, thanks so much for your kind words and welcome to Passions. Take great care, Juls |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Juls...Excellent!! Deb said it best...I was along for the ride with you...every step of the way. The last three lines are the best...and so true. Hardrock |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Yeah Hard I gotta agree with you. The last three lines are ones we can all relate to no matter what our story is. Thanks for coming along on my journey back in time with me. All the best to you, Juls |
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