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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
A Last Goodbye Sitting here, alone among the millions. No IM's, no chats, no buddies on. Amazing to feel so alone among so many, Friendless amidst a sea of friends. This is what it was like in the begining, Before all the new friends came along. Now they're all gone, I don't know why. Things have changed here I know But I can't understand how it went so wrong Thre was a time, not too long ago When I couldn't have a moment to myself. Now the clock ticks away the hours Without a simple "Hello" or "Where you been?" Could it all just end so easily? No questions, no reasons, not a hint. That magic is gone now, never to return I fear Cyberspace is just space now, cold and lonely. A place I can't even enjoy anymore, No more mail or jokes or lols, only "Welcome" Then nothing for hours on end. Soon I'll hear that familiar "Goodbye" One final time as I say goodbye to this place. Memories of friends are wonderful things But we can't live for memories, can we? |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
First off let me welcome you to dark Passions.  I am so glad you have decided to join our little family. Secondly... being the chat groupy that I am, I totally understand you here. I have a best friend here in cyber space. His name is Robert and he lives in Oregon. I have never met him, nor plan on meeting him. But that makes him never the less my friend. Things do tend to drift apart, here as in the real world. Make new friends, new smiles and new memories. You did it once, you can do it again! Good luck DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Wow, such a cold poem. I feel the emotions churning inside me as I read this poem. Great work!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
ive had that lonely feleing before..like right now..sitting in here waiting for reply's to my work...'no one likes it' slowly playing my my head..i did like this poem though it made me sad.... Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
Hey my friend....I love your poem. I am still there for you. I just seem to be on at different times. Catch you real soon. Dee |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Welcome to DP, I think you will enjoy being here, Its wonderful to have a place to express ourselves through writing, and we all share a common ground I think. Hope to see more!!! Good job!1 The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Welcome to passions! About your poem I'll just like to say I understand. Often I've felt the same way you're describing here. But I've found passions to be a nice place to be. ~Broken~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh LOTR, I do know this feeling as well. Welcome to DP, and with our help, maybe you won't have to feel this way any longer. Lovely poem, felt the emotion powerfully, Catalinamoon Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ah yes you describe it well. the reality of virtual living. excellent work. hope to see much more!! welcome to dark!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Thanks to all of you for such a warm welcome and crticisim. Lots of good work here! keep it coming : ) |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
You know, look me up as "firejerm" on yahoo, or EMTPM under aol, or even "jermsworld" under icq...I'll be more than happy to talk with you! "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
LOTR...Welcome. This is the "Cheers" bar of the internet. Isn't it nice to go "where everybody knows your name"? Very well said poem. Hardrock |
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