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When God's Hands Touched Us
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When God's Hands Touched Us |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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When God's Hands Touched Us If only for a while, I would wish to have you near me, to hold and be held as if there was no tomorrow. Not in fear, but in the tightest of holds, secure in the knowledge that I am and you are, and that together we shall be, and share all. a love that can defy anything a trust that cannever be broken a warmth that never needs to be heated a coolness to survive even the hardest of times a peace that sustains and allows a gathering of strength to grow and to stand tall against all odds, as we have in these years since we first met when God's hands touched us, with a love, so gentle that it brings tears to my eyes just remembering. Remembering all the moments and even now I can't recall any like those we are living through today... Sometimes I think that we have shared and loved too much and it was too easy... and now for whatever the reasons we are being tested. I remember failure as if it was just yesterday. It use to devastate me when young and usually it was due to misunderstanding or not studying hard enough. I am unprepared for this test, one of wills and fortitude. All we can do is take "a make-up" over and over again, hoping that you and I (we) can correct our mistakes and be "right" again. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
God touches us in so many ways. This poem hit home. It is a poem that everyone can realte to you know what I mean. Great work!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely poem, Maureen. Take care. Catalinamoon Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This was a very good poem. God certainly does have quite a bit of love to offer, in fact an infinite amount, probably. Very good piece of writing! |
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Chere Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 18 |
In every word . . . every phrase . . . I hear God whispering thoughts of Love* Thank you for sharing . . .* Chere* |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Xeonox thank you for the kind responses yes...we all have been touched in some way and can relate. ~~~softsmiles Maureen |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
MMoonchild...a test of wills and fortitude...so true. Sometimes that is what it all comes down to. Excellent, like all your work. Hardrock |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
Yesterdays love, todays love and tommorows love. Very thought provoking. John D |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
MMoonchild this is a beautiful lament and reminder that we have all been touched by God and sometime, and a reminder to remember and be grateful.. When this has finished here, perhaps you might get one of us moderator's to move it to the spiritual forum for you, I'm sure they'd like it over there too!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
catalinamoon and fractal...thank you both for you nice responses...this is a favorite of mine ~~softly Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Chere..thank you for those inspiring words... Hardrock..thank you...for enjoying my words ~~softly Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
JohnDLeclare thank you John...I am a romantic at heart...many say that...but I am that ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Isis thank you for your thoughtfulness.....I am content with it read here...and don't know enough about the site to have things moved ~~softly Maureen |
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misscris Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 27Leawood, KS, USA |
Maureen, Beautiful. Love changes, Love grows, but Love never dies. God touches each of us in our own special way and it's usually through our loved ones. What a lovely thought. Take care and keep smiling softly. misscris 'remember, we are only on loan from God to each other for a short while, relish it. |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
This was beautifully written...such longing portrayed. God touches us in so many ways, that even loss can be turned into something good by His touch. Linda |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
misscris yes very true that love never dies...someties fads a bit but never dies ~~softly thanking you Maureen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Soft smiles and warm hugs to you Maureen, this is an inspiring poem Be well "There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
L Tiuch...this was written to my husband...sometimes you wish you could give them a new set of ears..two don't seem to be enough.... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kethry if it inspired then I did what I intended...thank you again... ~~softly Maureen |
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