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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i just woke up and this come trough my head.. ~Waking up~ Slow rumbling thunder, rain falling madly against my window. Sigh. I know you won't be there, your gone from me. its been a while since you were there, your not wnating me. and your my obsession, i hesitate to look, in my mind your far away, but i have to look. i hate waking up these days, because i know you wont be there, i tried not to wake up today, because i know that you won't care. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Nickolette, I can tell your in alot of pain. IF you can try to look around at all the beauty given to us, sometimes it helps to try and re-focus on something that brings us nice thoughts. Hang in there...Deb1 The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I have been having a lot of these types of days lately, but all i can say is that it gets better. I like your poem good work, but try to see that things change and nothing lasts forever especially sadness. "Hopelessly figting the devil, futility feeling the monster climb deeper into me. Feeling him gnawing my heart awy hungrily, i'll never lose this pain |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i voted and i told you that your work is better than you said. i enjoyed the read i to feel this way there is no girl in my life and the one i love i can never have back because she is dead and no one since has made me complete like her but that's another story. and Please Check your Email. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice poem, Nik, and I know the feeling, its hard to adjust to not having that one with you. Hang in there. Catalinamoon Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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