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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Guilty You show me a man Holding a gun He don't give a damn He's having fun His eyes real wild He's shooting down A crying child You say that clown You say that's me I want to drown In a hellish sea This game of chess It runs real slow You say that's me And I say no How can it be When I can see That it's no one I've ever known? I thought I'd celebrate post 666 with one about a psycho! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
awesome! heheh amusing and yet chiling...your awesome...and thnx for supposrting me  email me sometime nikolette sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Pretty scary stuff. Love your work. Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, definitely a change of subject. Great writing as always. Catalinamoon |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I agree with Cat, change of subject, but love your writings!!! Excellent job!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ahaa, you evil little creature you. Post 666 paired up with this intense little number is pretty scary. Cool read. Be well U. *Peace. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
well I am glad this wasn't real ~~softly Maureen and congrats on the triple 6's |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great piece. enjoyed this... jwesley |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Different... unusual... but I like! |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Neat! What a poem for number 666! Creepy! Great job! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
interesting. strange number to celebrate tho lothie. makes me wonder......... hee hee. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a great poem and i like the number 666 and the idea. i like things and people who are different and i hope to see more like this from you keep it up my friend. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Total denial...and yet the results are still the same. A sad commentary on our blameless society. Great one, Uta. Hardrock |
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