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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-07-30 02:46 AM

Crimson Tides,
Waves had lied,

Stormy nature,
Ruled by the mistress hurricane,

Beachfronts collide,
Earth shatters in screams,

Fire of blood boils the core,
Father Ocean arrives in force,

Earth caves inwardly revealing portal of hell,
Tornado sweeps upward creating a vacuum to heaven,

Entity has come apart,
This is the end of the journey,
And for here we must part.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Lynne Dale
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria

1 posted 2000-07-30 03:43 AM

Excellent poem. Very elemental.
Kethry

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

2 posted 2000-07-30 10:37 PM

ahhhhhh nox... the master of imagery still reigns i see. good one. thanks for sharing. very vivid.

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

3 posted 2000-07-30 10:38 PM

ahhhhhh nox... the master of imagery still reigns i see. good one. thanks for sharing. very vivid.

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

4 posted 2000-07-30 11:05 PM

Chrystal clear images here!! Nice Job!! I really like this one

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2000-07-31 01:28 AM

Thank you for your comments my friends.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-07-31 11:48 AM

~X,...I'm totally enjoying the concept here. Oh such creative words for my mind to read. I love this. Crimson tides, waves had lied....yes!!! Aah, thank you. Be well X. *Peace.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2000-07-31 12:22 PM

Wonderful writings from you XenoX

regards,
sudhir

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

8 posted 2000-07-31 02:06 PM

Very vivid and powerful imagery ... A great read!

~verve

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

9 posted 2000-07-31 02:39 PM

You are *really* good at apocalyptic visions, if I might say so!
Four golden horses for this one!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

10 posted 2000-08-01 12:31 PM

this is a great poem i really enjoyed reading it and you are a great writer. and i hope to see more of your work real soon. keep it up my friend.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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